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Chapter 10.
Enjoy.
Copyrights are acknoledged to their rightful owners. In other words, the only thing that belongs to me, are the characters that I made up.
Have a nice day.
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Chapter 10: You're looking at it.
Enjoy.
Copyrights are acknoledged to their rightful owners. In other words, the only thing that belongs to me, are the characters that I made up.
Have a nice day.
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Chapter 10: You're looking at it.
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Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Your writing is very very very impressive.
I am saying this from the heart. There are few very good writers on this website ( no offense to other writers. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> ), and you are one of the good ones. I want you to keep up this good story. Every time I read one of these chapters, it makes me more curious as to what will happen in the next one. I believe you could even get better. Where at right now? I don't know. But there is always room for improvement. Although with your writing, I may be difficult to find a place. You're so good at it. C: Keep it up Mira.